The night of the earthquake, i was sleeping in my house, i dont have fear to the earthquakes but this day i was very nervous. In my house were all my family, alls very quiet except my grandmother, she fainted. When the earthquake begin more heavy, alls left his beds and we were in the garden looking the lights in the sky, this were amazing.
This night i could not sleep much, for the nervous and for the disorder, then alls were in the street when all the comunity were sharing of the fire of a bonfire, talking and drinking tea or coffee.
With all of earthquake in my comunity all more people joined and today help everyone. The material losses were not many and all people were fine.
The earthquake for my weren´t too terrible, only the scare, but the consecuences in the south were very terrible.
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The earthquake shows that we are small ants in the world and we nedd help together.
ReplyDeleteI see you and I happy because your family are ok.
bye
True, maybe we did not lose anything but in the south was terrible.
ReplyDeleteyes, fortunately the houses here had better materials in the construction than in the south, here could be worst, is a big thing to feel agraceful
ReplyDeletewell franco i've some suggestions for you, when you talk about a past day, you don't say "this", the right word is "that".
ReplyDeletewhen you said that you couldn't sleep is not because the "nervous" (because that is adjetive, and you need to use a noun), the correct world is nervousness.
Also when you said "all" is plural, if you put a "s" after the world, the word don't have sense.
Finally is not right "sharing of the fire of a bonfire", you should say just "sharing a bonfire".
so that's all, take care dude =)